This week we are preparing 2-3 ready to be published to our blog. This peace of writing is about an asteroid about to hit the ground and there is a family right at the spot where its about to hit so they all gather supplies together and left in there truck but they left two things and that is a little boy and a cat.
Here is my peace of writing.
This week we are preparing 2-3 ready to be published to our blog. This peace of writing is about an asteroid about to hit the ground and there is a giant gorilla, dog and a man. They are spending there last time on earth together.
Here is my peace of writing.
We have been learning how to write diffrent styles of poetry. Here is my black out poem.
Yet another thing we did for writing this week was to imagine that we had undergone metamorphosis.We had to pretend we had woken up one morning and discovered we had changed. It would be like going to sleep as a caterpillar and waking up as a butterfly. We had to write about what our new body was like and what we could do. I chose : invisibility
Here is my work.
Kia ora last week was our dear libariain Mrs C's decided to ritire. So all of Team Moana decided to make a farewell card for her. Here is my card.
Kia ora in Week 7 we had to use personifcation to write about our old playground. Here is mine:
In Week 5, we learned how to write a Simile poem. This kind of poem needs a simile in almost every line. We could base it on any topic we wanted. I chose to base mine on 'Friendship' Here is my work hope you enjoy.
This week we had to write a Repetition poem about what we didn’t do in the holidays. Here is my work:
This week I and my class are re editing and publishing our work from the last two weeks. Here is my work enjoy.
Kia ora! A couple of weeks ago my class and I decided to give the local church a visit. We all wrote down what we saw in our booklets and then we used the ideas in out booklet to write a story. Here is my work hope you enjoy!
Kia ora,
We have been learning about how adjectives can be used to describe a noun. We used opposite adjectives to write a couplet poem. Here are two couplet poems that I wrote. Can you find my opposite adjectives?
Kia ora! I have been learning how to include a range of adgectives to add description to our writing. Here is my description!
Kia ora.
We are learning that an adjective is a word that describes a noun. Writers add adjectives to their sentences as it helps them paint a clear picture in a reader’s mind about the characters and places they are reading about.
Hi my name is cruz and im a year 6.I and my classmates have been working around the monarch butterfly species. So we have made some acrostic poems. Here is my work!
Caterpillar is soon flying away in the big white clouds.
Always eating many green leaves.
The caterpillar has 3 different colours in different places.
The colour of the caterpillar is black yellow and white.
Entertaining with its wiggle dance moves.
Rejected from the butterfly club until it becomes a butterfly.
Pooped on Te Maramas Jacket.
Entertaining to watch.
Lovely fantastic colours all over its body.
Larva when it was a baby.
All over the swan plant.
Really smells like leaves and dirt.
Smells like a swan plant from out in the wild.
Today were showing you our Ohaeawai school values writen down. Here is my writing!
We have been learning how to use adjectives to describe a mood and atmosphere. Here is a picture of our tree house that my group made and the adjectives to describe the mood.
Can you guess the mood and atmosphere?
Hello fellow blogers
I just came back to Ohaeawai School and started to help Maunga Iti and Team Maunga just for Friday and now I know how a teacher feels. For Friday I spelling tested Maunga Iti and I got really confused about what they were saying to me so I got some help from Hayley and she could understand what they were saying. Then I went to Team Maunga to help with their Fathers' Day cards.
