Hot air balloons

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is I am learning how to use commas. I need to finish my stories. We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.

Hot air balloon race

The racing  is about to start I can't wait to try out on my new
amazing hot air balloon. Kaira and I are going to have so much
fun .I feel so scared. Away we go! I see fluffy clouds in the sky.

I bought too big packs of water, two big packs of marshmallows,
two packs of pizza and one pack of carrots. I brought a gas fire,
a little mattress and two big blankets. A warm jacket if the hot
air balloon stops. I'll bring a kite too. Oh  I'm on  the night shift.
Away we go! I hear birds chirping by my amazing hot air balloon.
I hear people cheering for us.